My First Lighting Programing for TV Station

Hi to all

Not sure can I do this .
Sorry if this cannot be done here ?
The link above is video of my lighting programming

Lighting Program that I did for a
Chinese Movie Opening and promotion Event
Pls advise me on the Lighting programming
I know that I gave too much Smoke for the Lighting Beam effects will watchout on my smoke
This is my first Lighting programming that I did for TV Station
Did not have much time to do Programming and I only got the song for preformance during rehearsal with the performers
Still got a long way to get use to the TV way of working .
Waiting for your feed back and tips

Pls advise
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